One Yukkuri Place

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Topic: New story on YFT! Yunyaaa~

EasyV

Personally I would've preferred if you included Chen and Alice's backgrounds.
As it is now, Chen might've as well not be there at all. At the beginning it was hinted that Alice was two-timing, but then it went nowhere with Chen simply disappearing under some snow.
It was an interesting set-up which could've been used to create some more dynamics within Patche's nest between Chen and Marisa (and maybe the little ones too.)

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